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When I first saw her, God, I didn’t know what took over me, She was a picture of pure beauty, The closest to heaven I felt I’ll ever be, I got to know her a few days later, We met in the park, full of valentine haters She gave me a small smile, mines stretched to a mile, I offered her dinner; she said that sounds fine, She’d met me at 7, for a swig of wine, Of course I already felt woozy, she was intoxication A bottle full of inebriation, I felt my knees go weak when I saw her, A beauty like no other, I booked the expensive restaurant Bought the most expensive wine, Even bought myself a suit, As though if it were a crime, To not let someone like her, get the best in the world And when I met her at 7 sharp, She seemed to stop time, She took the air out of me, **** I could say was hey, She gave a tinkling laugh and said that her name was May, I thought, what a fine name, for such a girl, Her eyes were diamonds, her hair in all curls, Around her neck was a single pearl, We had a good night; we drank till we were doozy, We laughed till we choked And then devil had to come and stop all the fun, “April” he said “what are you doing here” “Her names not April, its May” I did argue “No, my names April” she smirked “Get me quite away from this **** My mouth fell to somewhere in the middle of the earth, I had felt my love for her was bulletproof But she was the one who shot me And watching her walk away, I did wonder Why was she here drinking all the red wine? She was perhaps my intoxicated valentine, The one who I didn’t deserve, She’s gonna leave me in quarantine, She left me with this horrible disease, And I don’t think it will ever cease She was my evil intoxicated valentine She was my bitter intoxicated valentine. f.f. & m.g.
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 8:19 PM UTC
my intoxicated valentine
When I first saw her, God, I didn’t know what took over me, She was a picture of pure beauty, The closest to heaven I felt I’ll ever be, I got to know her a few days later, We met in the park, full of valentine haters She gave me a small smile, mines stretched to a mile, I offered her dinner; she said that sounds fine, She’d met me at 7, for a swig of wine, Of course I already felt woozy, she was intoxication A bottle full of inebriation, I felt my knees go weak when I saw her, A beauty like no other, I booked the expensive restaurant Bought the most expensive wine, Even bought myself a suit, As though if it were a crime, To not let someone like her, get the best in the world And when I met her at 7 sharp, She seemed to stop time, She took the air out of me, **** I could say was hey, She gave a tinkling laugh and said that her name was May, I thought, what a fine name, for such a girl, Her eyes were diamonds, her hair in all curls, Around her neck was a single pearl, We had a good night; we drank till we were doozy, We laughed till we choked And then devil had to come and stop all the fun, “April” he said “what are you doing here” “Her names not April, its May” I did argue “No, my names April” she smirked “Get me quite away from this **** My mouth fell to somewhere in the middle of the earth, I had felt my love for her was bulletproof But she was the one who shot me And watching her walk away, I did wonder Why was she here drinking all the red wine? She was perhaps my intoxicated valentine, The one who I didn’t deserve, She’s gonna leave me in quarantine, She left me with this horrible disease, And I don’t think it will ever cease She was my evil intoxicated valentine She was my bitter intoxicated valentine. f.f. & m.g.
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 8:19 PM UTC
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