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the giving of salt, is a delicate thing. there will always be, salt at my table, for those who grieve, or have lost. salt can be, the smallest of things, the merest touch of compassionate hands, a glance, a memory, a treasured photograph, a fragrance that lingers, even though they are not there. it is hard to recieve, these gifts of salt,   often given freely from a caring heart. when all you desire is to, hide and fade away. but the secret of salt is in, the reminder, that for the sake of all, you need to stay. there is salt in crying, salt in tears, sometimes there is salt in the quiet solitude, the contemplation of the, changing years. there is, little, to no, salt in allowing your fear any power,  any place. there is much salt in finding the strength to run your allotted marathon. salt can heal, the heart, broken. give strength to those, faint and lagging. reknit, the patchwork mind. we will all need, the gift of salt.... mutiple times, through the years, of our life. salt is universal, to all manner of man. salt is salt unto itself, salt is ever, needful salt is always, always kind. yet, still, the giving of salt,   is such a delicate thing
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Apr 13, 2014
Apr 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM UTC
the giving of salt.
the giving of salt, is a delicate thing. there will always be, salt at my table, for those who grieve, or have lost. salt can be, the smallest of things, the merest touch of compassionate hands, a glance, a memory, a treasured photograph, a fragrance that lingers, even though they are not there. it is hard to recieve, these gifts of salt,   often given freely from a caring heart. when all you desire is to, hide and fade away. but the secret of salt is in, the reminder, that for the sake of all, you need to stay. there is salt in crying, salt in tears, sometimes there is salt in the quiet solitude, the contemplation of the, changing years. there is, little, to no, salt in allowing your fear any power,  any place. there is much salt in finding the strength to run your allotted marathon. salt can heal, the heart, broken. give strength to those, faint and lagging. reknit, the patchwork mind. we will all need, the gift of salt.... mutiple times, through the years, of our life. salt is universal, to all manner of man. salt is salt unto itself, salt is ever, needful salt is always, always kind. yet, still, the giving of salt,   is such a delicate thing
napowrimo day 12 prompt: write replacement poem in this piece i replaced the word comfort with the word salt
betterdays
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Apr 13, 2014
Apr 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM UTC
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