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I suppose I ought to let you know Just how appreciative I am Of your service to me And my feet You took me places On clouds I don't remember Ever getting sore heels We've seen all kinds of weather Fierce rain on the morning walk to school And mother nature's many mood swings Have taken a toll on you Your smooth black laces Are frayed and caked With crusty salt From the sidewalk that once was icy Your once black leather Is dull and gray And has splotches Of mud and dust Once you were fit for any occasion Now all I put you on for Is to go get the mail; A job better suited for slippers Someday I promise To shine you up Give you new laces And go for a walk with you.
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Apr 5, 2014
Apr 5, 2014 at 4:01 PM UTC
Improved Letter to my Shoes
I suppose I ought to let you know Just how appreciative I am Of your service to me And my feet You took me places On clouds I don't remember Ever getting sore heels We've seen all kinds of weather Fierce rain on the morning walk to school And mother nature's many mood swings Have taken a toll on you Your smooth black laces Are frayed and caked With crusty salt From the sidewalk that once was icy Your once black leather Is dull and gray And has splotches Of mud and dust Once you were fit for any occasion Now all I put you on for Is to go get the mail; A job better suited for slippers Someday I promise To shine you up Give you new laces And go for a walk with you.
aaron-duykers
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Apr 5, 2014
Apr 5, 2014 at 4:01 PM UTC
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