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A small group (or collection, if you wish) of wanderers and travellers And people with desires to see great marvels Met by accidence, in a era of confusement Held together, by mutual suspicions, they decided To leave their abodes.   So they travelled a long way Until they were in a place A very dusty place, with dry old things Dry like a last years leaves, as if there were trees In a scorching new summer They decided by mutual acclamation that they were searching now A quest had been undertaken By accidental serendipity Or so they believed, among themeselves To find a way - To no longer be in this place of dust With its winds, and fierce sands The kind the stings your eyes, grits your teeth sands your clothing and small possessions And after a many month of same such Make's your light heart - heavy. But lacking a compass or even knowledge of one Or any real idea of how to travel they moved in circles for many's the long time Never really sure they were, arguing........ always This is probably what kept them alive, or at least That is what many now believe Their arguing - their fighting this generates interest, and interest keeps you alive But still in spite of all this, they weren't really Getting - Anywhere................. Once in their travels, they came upon a walled city They knocked hard the gates, made of a redded, felted wood Soft to the touch, like a hide of a living creature, or rough carpet "What do you want?!"   "Who are you, state your business please!" Cried the Gatekeeper to them As this was his role in the proceedings, you see; And he didn't get to do it often Very few people came through the wastes, unless.......Compelled - by one reason or another So he was overdramatizing (a little), But we can forgive him, his job was quite boring, after all. Help us! They cried We want to leave this dusty dry place Full of bleached sheep bones, black stones And red rocks; with that dust, The dust that stings our eyes grits our teeth sands our clothing and small possessions And after a many month of wandering And wondering It has made our once - light hearts heavy with opression For now we cannot perform our tasks This place is too harsh for us, We are only poeple, and wanderers, after all "Ah, I see!", the gatekeeper declaimed A little over dramatically (yet again) "So you are lost then, my wanderers?"   No!  Said several of the more...... outspoken wanderers. There are always a few outsoken people in any group, (Unless it's a group for shy people, Of course). "We, know precisely where we are, - We are in the dusty waste at your gates! We just don't want to be here!, we want to be inside!" At that, the Gatekeeper opened the door Slowly and surely but with many creaks and groans And inside, inside.....well - There was a dusty city, But just like outside With unkempt streets filled with goats, dogs, people Unruly Children, playing with dried out wood dolls Angry woman - murmuring to each other And irritated men - watching the angry women "Come in if you wish" he said. For we were all as you are now Once.................................... To be continued.
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Apr 1, 2014
Apr 1, 2014 at 2:38 PM UTC
The Wanderers (part I)
A small group (or collection, if you wish) of wanderers and travellers And people with desires to see great marvels Met by accidence, in a era of confusement Held together, by mutual suspicions, they decided To leave their abodes.   So they travelled a long way Until they were in a place A very dusty place, with dry old things Dry like a last years leaves, as if there were trees In a scorching new summer They decided by mutual acclamation that they were searching now A quest had been undertaken By accidental serendipity Or so they believed, among themeselves To find a way - To no longer be in this place of dust With its winds, and fierce sands The kind the stings your eyes, grits your teeth sands your clothing and small possessions And after a many month of same such Make's your light heart - heavy. But lacking a compass or even knowledge of one Or any real idea of how to travel they moved in circles for many's the long time Never really sure they were, arguing........ always This is probably what kept them alive, or at least That is what many now believe Their arguing - their fighting this generates interest, and interest keeps you alive But still in spite of all this, they weren't really Getting - Anywhere................. Once in their travels, they came upon a walled city They knocked hard the gates, made of a redded, felted wood Soft to the touch, like a hide of a living creature, or rough carpet "What do you want?!"   "Who are you, state your business please!" Cried the Gatekeeper to them As this was his role in the proceedings, you see; And he didn't get to do it often Very few people came through the wastes, unless.......Compelled - by one reason or another So he was overdramatizing (a little), But we can forgive him, his job was quite boring, after all. Help us! They cried We want to leave this dusty dry place Full of bleached sheep bones, black stones And red rocks; with that dust, The dust that stings our eyes grits our teeth sands our clothing and small possessions And after a many month of wandering And wondering It has made our once - light hearts heavy with opression For now we cannot perform our tasks This place is too harsh for us, We are only poeple, and wanderers, after all "Ah, I see!", the gatekeeper declaimed A little over dramatically (yet again) "So you are lost then, my wanderers?"   No!  Said several of the more...... outspoken wanderers. There are always a few outsoken people in any group, (Unless it's a group for shy people, Of course). "We, know precisely where we are, - We are in the dusty waste at your gates! We just don't want to be here!, we want to be inside!" At that, the Gatekeeper opened the door Slowly and surely but with many creaks and groans And inside, inside.....well - There was a dusty city, But just like outside With unkempt streets filled with goats, dogs, people Unruly Children, playing with dried out wood dolls Angry woman - murmuring to each other And irritated men - watching the angry women "Come in if you wish" he said. For we were all as you are now Once.................................... To be continued.
Second draft of part 1
paul-thomas-galbally
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Apr 1, 2014
Apr 1, 2014 at 2:38 PM UTC
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