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1431 poems in ye old inbox, genteel knocking, whispering thru stolid front door love me a little lot, little lot, love me? this is not mere work product, collegial-laid upon me for gentle shared, for pre-review, Nottingham Forest arrowed, bow shaped pithy comments, these are the holy-of-the-holies attention-me-crystal-cries, prayers, wry observations, nature collations, me and thee adorations, heart rendering screams of need, these are the moments in your life raw-roughened gifted or threaded smooth cursed, but tendered unto my caring. (an aside: perhaps you understand better now why woman-in-the-moon imagery, red bowed, grapefruit tasting hearts, all the lovelies, word shape shifts a/k/a Imagery language delights! but time-using, confusingly confuses, and has been erased from my own poetry frame) gnawing doubt me routs, god gave me humans, and gave them speech, to bring me closer to him thru them. somewhere in those 1431 essays of labor, dashed off, handcrafted, pithy or poor, just might be the one justification for my opening my eyes this poetry someday Sunday sun-day. put the cofe on (saving letters, saving time, deleting unnecessary e's from my life till when I am dying on all-on-that desperate e-n-ee-dy day). loaded my shotgun heart with loves and likes, yellow thunderbolt bullets firing, and considered yourself notified I'm a-coming over, shoes on the cofe table, breaking taboo's gonna read 1431 and when dining done, gonna pay attention to my muse, my woman, cause she is the original e, that provides the raw materials, in ye old nat-box, that lets me love ever one of them, she is the e in me and me will be in you, starting now.
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Mar 30, 2014
Mar 30, 2014 at 6:57 AM UTC
1431
1431 poems in ye old inbox, genteel knocking, whispering thru stolid front door love me a little lot, little lot, love me? this is not mere work product, collegial-laid upon me for gentle shared, for pre-review, Nottingham Forest arrowed, bow shaped pithy comments, these are the holy-of-the-holies attention-me-crystal-cries, prayers, wry observations, nature collations, me and thee adorations, heart rendering screams of need, these are the moments in your life raw-roughened gifted or threaded smooth cursed, but tendered unto my caring. (an aside: perhaps you understand better now why woman-in-the-moon imagery, red bowed, grapefruit tasting hearts, all the lovelies, word shape shifts a/k/a Imagery language delights! but time-using, confusingly confuses, and has been erased from my own poetry frame) gnawing doubt me routs, god gave me humans, and gave them speech, to bring me closer to him thru them. somewhere in those 1431 essays of labor, dashed off, handcrafted, pithy or poor, just might be the one justification for my opening my eyes this poetry someday Sunday sun-day. put the cofe on (saving letters, saving time, deleting unnecessary e's from my life till when I am dying on all-on-that desperate e-n-ee-dy day). loaded my shotgun heart with loves and likes, yellow thunderbolt bullets firing, and considered yourself notified I'm a-coming over, shoes on the cofe table, breaking taboo's gonna read 1431 and when dining done, gonna pay attention to my muse, my woman, cause she is the original e, that provides the raw materials, in ye old nat-box, that lets me love ever one of them, she is the e in me and me will be in you, starting now.
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Mar 30, 2014
Mar 30, 2014 at 6:57 AM UTC
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