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If you are searching for a way To illuminate our inner-self And conquer the barriers inside us Then I have a light for your smoke May I introduce you to L'Bastardos. If you're feeling low For no particular reason you can think of Then maybe it is time to be thinking of making love. You've got all these hang-ups about cash flow, And you are not too sure of how things will reveal themselves Everything is taken care of and I will take full control- Give me your body till morning, I don't need your mind presented to me, And the Devil has your soul, I'm just seeing out the tenancy,   The day has brought the sky to watch you play- A thousand miles away.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 6:17 AM UTC
BARRIERS
If you are searching for a way To illuminate our inner-self And conquer the barriers inside us Then I have a light for your smoke May I introduce you to L'Bastardos. If you're feeling low For no particular reason you can think of Then maybe it is time to be thinking of making love. You've got all these hang-ups about cash flow, And you are not too sure of how things will reveal themselves Everything is taken care of and I will take full control- Give me your body till morning, I don't need your mind presented to me, And the Devil has your soul, I'm just seeing out the tenancy,   The day has brought the sky to watch you play- A thousand miles away.
First verse2 syllable difference 1-2 3-4 then 3 again on extra line. Because of fifth line deliberately placed the free-style is ordered into a ordered convention but without any connection from one line to next.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 6:17 AM UTC
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