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Too many people write about love without being right about love Full of yet tight on their love Spewing an echo of flowery 19th century poetry When the real love is a point of view It's looking back on that girl you hated 5 years back with a new eye It could just be a cat purring in your lap It could be a warm fireplace or a ******* you gave in Chiang Mai It could be the ocean or it could be that time when you collapsed in a gutter in New Orleans and you lay in the trash but looked up at the stars
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Mar 27, 2014
Mar 27, 2014 at 6:07 PM UTC
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Too many people write about love without being right about love Full of yet tight on their love Spewing an echo of flowery 19th century poetry When the real love is a point of view It's looking back on that girl you hated 5 years back with a new eye It could just be a cat purring in your lap It could be a warm fireplace or a ******* you gave in Chiang Mai It could be the ocean or it could be that time when you collapsed in a gutter in New Orleans and you lay in the trash but looked up at the stars
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Mar 27, 2014
Mar 27, 2014 at 6:07 PM UTC
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