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I could know any of them in a dark room, eyes blindfolded, hands tied. How, you ask? One of them smells like fresh laundry, warm, like hugs, a tinge of unshed tears, a safe place to sleep. She smells like home more than anywhere I've been, when I can catch her smell. I have breathed this in for so long, sometimes it eludes me, the way I cannot scent myself, for an abundance of familiarity. It feel traitorous to try and describe how a second smells, that when she will never understand, but she smells like spontaneous gifts of friendship, and long sunlit days, she smells so much of herself I could never imagine her differently. Yet another scents the air in such a way I feel my lungs are bloomings, and yet are somehow contricting, like I cannot draw enough of this air, to breathe so deeply as I need. He smells of an accomplishment hard-won, but worth every step of the way, though there is a hidden bite, a concealed sharpness, an almost imperceptible tang. I cannot begin to think how to explain the intriguing way another smells, as I cannot quite place my finger on it. Much like its owner, her aroma is a woven tapestry, and so we see the complete product, but never the individual threads, a perfect work of art. And lastly, the one who often seems to have no smell at all. Spend some time around him, however, teach your lungs how to sense his presence, and you will notice he does not smell flashy or bright, his smell is constructed of strong undertones, complimenting and supporting everyone else, comforting like some people's idea of god. Sometimes I think if I could have my own particular brand of perfume all the time, I would be invincible.
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Mar 28, 2014
Mar 28, 2014 at 1:03 AM UTC
My Own Peculiar Brand Of Perfume
I could know any of them in a dark room, eyes blindfolded, hands tied. How, you ask? One of them smells like fresh laundry, warm, like hugs, a tinge of unshed tears, a safe place to sleep. She smells like home more than anywhere I've been, when I can catch her smell. I have breathed this in for so long, sometimes it eludes me, the way I cannot scent myself, for an abundance of familiarity. It feel traitorous to try and describe how a second smells, that when she will never understand, but she smells like spontaneous gifts of friendship, and long sunlit days, she smells so much of herself I could never imagine her differently. Yet another scents the air in such a way I feel my lungs are bloomings, and yet are somehow contricting, like I cannot draw enough of this air, to breathe so deeply as I need. He smells of an accomplishment hard-won, but worth every step of the way, though there is a hidden bite, a concealed sharpness, an almost imperceptible tang. I cannot begin to think how to explain the intriguing way another smells, as I cannot quite place my finger on it. Much like its owner, her aroma is a woven tapestry, and so we see the complete product, but never the individual threads, a perfect work of art. And lastly, the one who often seems to have no smell at all. Spend some time around him, however, teach your lungs how to sense his presence, and you will notice he does not smell flashy or bright, his smell is constructed of strong undertones, complimenting and supporting everyone else, comforting like some people's idea of god. Sometimes I think if I could have my own particular brand of perfume all the time, I would be invincible.
March 13, 2014 12:15 AM
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Mar 28, 2014 at 1:03 AM UTC
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