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The water lay placid yet beneath the surface surreptitious dangers went unseen The waders ignored the well known dangers threatening their feet As they went deeper the creatures observed The splashing only inviting the lurking predators They had been told to take caution avoiding the exposure Instead they leaped into the jaws of the ingenious monster Leaving their families without relief nor closure Creating a scene so treacherous it haunted the dreams of children Their parents cried out in insurmountable pain As the onlookers perceived them with unrelenting shame
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 11:33 PM UTC
Avoidable Tragedies
The water lay placid yet beneath the surface surreptitious dangers went unseen The waders ignored the well known dangers threatening their feet As they went deeper the creatures observed The splashing only inviting the lurking predators They had been told to take caution avoiding the exposure Instead they leaped into the jaws of the ingenious monster Leaving their families without relief nor closure Creating a scene so treacherous it haunted the dreams of children Their parents cried out in insurmountable pain As the onlookers perceived them with unrelenting shame
danielle-rose
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 11:33 PM UTC
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