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A screaming pierces the serenity of the river valley. Overturned wreck of a car and splattered, shattered, scattered glass. A fresh-cut gouge in the dirt embankment where he clipped it and in retaliation it flipped him on his roof.  He staggers from the chaos moaning not from pain, but from the Jaeger, Keystone, and regret of totaling his mother's car.  He flees the scene with his homies, his fellow drunken cronies and the witnesses are left behind, scratching heads and raising brows.  I among them contemplate the carnage and I try remembering a different time, ten years ago or so... This place used to be so beautiful before the partiers and potheads and Varrio Locos took it over.  Shallow waters filled with algae drifts and interspersed with boulder bridges.  Sandy beaches, nature trails, wild grapes, and fishing holes.  The last free-flowing, undammed, undamned river in the state... Now it's bloated with beer and blood and bad decisions.  Not a bare rock face remains, each one caked up in graffiti makeup.  And the air, once frequented by the heady scent of sycamore is far too thick with marijuana anymore. Santa Margarita, choking on smoke and dope and disrespect, once my heart and home and refuge, now and forever a cheapened wasteland.
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 1:11 AM UTC
Santa Margarita
A screaming pierces the serenity of the river valley. Overturned wreck of a car and splattered, shattered, scattered glass. A fresh-cut gouge in the dirt embankment where he clipped it and in retaliation it flipped him on his roof.  He staggers from the chaos moaning not from pain, but from the Jaeger, Keystone, and regret of totaling his mother's car.  He flees the scene with his homies, his fellow drunken cronies and the witnesses are left behind, scratching heads and raising brows.  I among them contemplate the carnage and I try remembering a different time, ten years ago or so... This place used to be so beautiful before the partiers and potheads and Varrio Locos took it over.  Shallow waters filled with algae drifts and interspersed with boulder bridges.  Sandy beaches, nature trails, wild grapes, and fishing holes.  The last free-flowing, undammed, undamned river in the state... Now it's bloated with beer and blood and bad decisions.  Not a bare rock face remains, each one caked up in graffiti makeup.  And the air, once frequented by the heady scent of sycamore is far too thick with marijuana anymore. Santa Margarita, choking on smoke and dope and disrespect, once my heart and home and refuge, now and forever a cheapened wasteland.
I hate how we humans must adulterate whatever beauty we can find, just so we can prove in some way that we do indeed exist. We may claim dominance over nature, but need we express it? And as a disclaimer, drunk car crash dude was fine and no one (thankfully) was dumb enough to be in his car.
mydissonance
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 1:11 AM UTC
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