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My whiskey habit is complimented then insulted by the ever temperamental voice of Jim Morrison, I listen to Alabama Song by The Doors I throw my pen and page In an anger induced rage As my mind recites the wrong words To his poems and songs His voice plays on repeat All i can do is blame myself as the primitive synth dances it's oscillating tunes through one of my depleted senses. My hearing Mojo Rising's face crudely made into pop art painting by a fan, an idoliser's image Suddenly the fender telecaster takes over the smokey airways Hypnotising, mesmerising as it fills the space between the barely conscious being and the walls that surround The tempo of the snare, tom and high hat slows I now have time to gather my ever harsh and bitter thoughts Harsh like the whiskey, bitter like me
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Mar 18, 2014
Mar 18, 2014 at 9:33 AM UTC
Jim Morrison Is My Only Friend
My whiskey habit is complimented then insulted by the ever temperamental voice of Jim Morrison, I listen to Alabama Song by The Doors I throw my pen and page In an anger induced rage As my mind recites the wrong words To his poems and songs His voice plays on repeat All i can do is blame myself as the primitive synth dances it's oscillating tunes through one of my depleted senses. My hearing Mojo Rising's face crudely made into pop art painting by a fan, an idoliser's image Suddenly the fender telecaster takes over the smokey airways Hypnotising, mesmerising as it fills the space between the barely conscious being and the walls that surround The tempo of the snare, tom and high hat slows I now have time to gather my ever harsh and bitter thoughts Harsh like the whiskey, bitter like me
Errors are inevitable, go **** yourselves
ryan-topez
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Australian
Mar 18, 2014
Mar 18, 2014 at 9:33 AM UTC
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