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Looking at him falling, I wonder what he thought, if he thought. Or if it was just a mad dash, an act of last resort. Closing in. It must have happened so fast. T       T       w                  w             i            i                    s                t      t          i                 i a  n  d                 n g                   turning a terminal velocity, a violent end. Whether cut short, or run its course it was his choice regardless, we’re one in the same. I think I miss the dreams the most. All San Francisco fog and New Mexico heat lightning, the honest glimpse of a false future. But upon waking, I remember him, and how it must of felt, to burst through that window, succumb to fate. “You don’t know how you make people feel!” I don’t know how I make myself feel. He was, in retrospect, the harbinger of cynicism that would later manifest in quiet exits and late walks home. Purposeful, yet regrettable. I may be on the same track, I just hope I don’t land on my head.
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Oct 1, 2010
Oct 1, 2010 at 5:31 PM UTC
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Looking at him falling, I wonder what he thought, if he thought. Or if it was just a mad dash, an act of last resort. Closing in. It must have happened so fast. T       T       w                  w             i            i                    s                t      t          i                 i a  n  d                 n g                   turning a terminal velocity, a violent end. Whether cut short, or run its course it was his choice regardless, we’re one in the same. I think I miss the dreams the most. All San Francisco fog and New Mexico heat lightning, the honest glimpse of a false future. But upon waking, I remember him, and how it must of felt, to burst through that window, succumb to fate. “You don’t know how you make people feel!” I don’t know how I make myself feel. He was, in retrospect, the harbinger of cynicism that would later manifest in quiet exits and late walks home. Purposeful, yet regrettable. I may be on the same track, I just hope I don’t land on my head.
Sept. 2010
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Oct 1, 2010
Oct 1, 2010 at 5:31 PM UTC
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