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Oh how it dawned upon me As ironic as it sounds I complained freely Longing life out of bounds I am not slave to one But a slave to the system That seems fair until You set targets and miss them You’re free to live Any role you desire Unless of course It’s qualifications you require These rules hold you back With your best years spent You’ll look back at Shane’s words And see what he meant But Shane’s not here now It’s finished its job It moulded him into An oppressed slaving cog Go about your lives Reside ignorant too But one day you’ll realise This system owns you
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Mar 12, 2014
Mar 12, 2014 at 8:03 AM UTC
False Freedom
Oh how it dawned upon me As ironic as it sounds I complained freely Longing life out of bounds I am not slave to one But a slave to the system That seems fair until You set targets and miss them You’re free to live Any role you desire Unless of course It’s qualifications you require These rules hold you back With your best years spent You’ll look back at Shane’s words And see what he meant But Shane’s not here now It’s finished its job It moulded him into An oppressed slaving cog Go about your lives Reside ignorant too But one day you’ll realise This system owns you
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Mar 12, 2014
Mar 12, 2014 at 8:03 AM UTC
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