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This pressure is like a waterfall, as I topple from the force into the water. I'm submerged in everything you've created, and drowning in your dissatisfaction. I can feel myself within your thrall, as you begin this bloodless slaughter, my lungs begin to feel weighted, and I am unable to do any action. But I have been tossed in a lake before, and was expected to drown in the pool, all thought I would die in the bathtub, but luckily I know how to swim. I will collect myself out of this mental war, and not be played as a fool, and it will be my turn to drub, and I will make it to the water's brim.
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Mar 11, 2014
Mar 11, 2014 at 12:10 PM UTC
Learning to swim
This pressure is like a waterfall, as I topple from the force into the water. I'm submerged in everything you've created, and drowning in your dissatisfaction. I can feel myself within your thrall, as you begin this bloodless slaughter, my lungs begin to feel weighted, and I am unable to do any action. But I have been tossed in a lake before, and was expected to drown in the pool, all thought I would die in the bathtub, but luckily I know how to swim. I will collect myself out of this mental war, and not be played as a fool, and it will be my turn to drub, and I will make it to the water's brim.
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Mar 11, 2014
Mar 11, 2014 at 12:10 PM UTC
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