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I am the greatest love maker, But the worst love show-er, Didn't know what to show her, So I showered her with petty symbolisms, A rose, to display the danger and perfection, A ring, for her everlasting beauty, A song, to sing from the heart A thong, to dance in, to prepare romancing, Shoes, to walk in with class and elegance, Still not enough And so I gave, A watch, so show time is of the essence, A car, to take her to any destination, A house, to make home With A dog, so she’s never alone Still it wasn’t enough And so I gave, A clone of me So I’m never really gone, My arms to embrace, My legs, to stand, I even gave My feet and hands. She rejected everything, Down to My skin to hide the inner workings My bones for supporting My nerve My muscles for strength My height for length My width for conception And my depth for protection You wanted nothing From the concrete To abstract From the start. What was missing? You wanted not a thing, But My heart.
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Oct 1, 2010
Oct 1, 2010 at 12:26 AM UTC
The Giving “Me”
I am the greatest love maker, But the worst love show-er, Didn't know what to show her, So I showered her with petty symbolisms, A rose, to display the danger and perfection, A ring, for her everlasting beauty, A song, to sing from the heart A thong, to dance in, to prepare romancing, Shoes, to walk in with class and elegance, Still not enough And so I gave, A watch, so show time is of the essence, A car, to take her to any destination, A house, to make home With A dog, so she’s never alone Still it wasn’t enough And so I gave, A clone of me So I’m never really gone, My arms to embrace, My legs, to stand, I even gave My feet and hands. She rejected everything, Down to My skin to hide the inner workings My bones for supporting My nerve My muscles for strength My height for length My width for conception And my depth for protection You wanted nothing From the concrete To abstract From the start. What was missing? You wanted not a thing, But My heart.
joseph-childress
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Oct 1, 2010
Oct 1, 2010 at 12:26 AM UTC
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