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Vermilion skies pass me by and into the night the chasm opines an imagined Ferris wheel at a carnival turns contra against smothering bindweed, is this a metaphor for confusion ? a turnaround of sorts and with a habitual doff of my hat I bid to draw this recurring dream to an end, the naked view now seems surreal. Should  I then hear the adjacent marching feet of others surrendering their names in juxtaposition.
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Mar 6, 2014
Mar 6, 2014 at 4:50 PM UTC
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Vermilion skies pass me by and into the night the chasm opines an imagined Ferris wheel at a carnival turns contra against smothering bindweed, is this a metaphor for confusion ? a turnaround of sorts and with a habitual doff of my hat I bid to draw this recurring dream to an end, the naked view now seems surreal. Should  I then hear the adjacent marching feet of others surrendering their names in juxtaposition.
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Mar 6, 2014
Mar 6, 2014 at 4:50 PM UTC
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