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Your black, heavy overcoat, hangs from a hook on the door. It looks haunted now, a black phantom of serge, with arms, without hands, unbuttoned, holding a memory of you inside its hold, snuggled up within, safe from the cold. Your youngest brother has inherited, your black coat now, he wears it higher, being taller, but it does not fit so snug or hold him so tight as it did you, a short while ago. He wore it to your funeral, buttoned up neat, your heavy overcoat, serge of black; but he would gladly have given to you, if he could have had you back. I finger the sleeves, smooth along the black serge, sense you there still, in my mind's eye, with black hat and tie and black shades, that Blues Brother gaze, back in the good times, my son, in your good young days.
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Mar 2, 2014
Mar 2, 2014 at 4:06 PM UTC
YOUR BLACK COAT.
Your black, heavy overcoat, hangs from a hook on the door. It looks haunted now, a black phantom of serge, with arms, without hands, unbuttoned, holding a memory of you inside its hold, snuggled up within, safe from the cold. Your youngest brother has inherited, your black coat now, he wears it higher, being taller, but it does not fit so snug or hold him so tight as it did you, a short while ago. He wore it to your funeral, buttoned up neat, your heavy overcoat, serge of black; but he would gladly have given to you, if he could have had you back. I finger the sleeves, smooth along the black serge, sense you there still, in my mind's eye, with black hat and tie and black shades, that Blues Brother gaze, back in the good times, my son, in your good young days.
ON OLE' BLACK OVERCOAT.
terry-collett
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Mar 2, 2014
Mar 2, 2014 at 4:06 PM UTC
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