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I thought your poem was really sweet, but I just don’t think of you that way. Honestly, sometimes it’s too much: the endless proclamations, and the incessant compliments. Maybe if you were more like Paul -- We got dinner the other night, Applebees’ Ultimate Trio. Not once did he hold a door or offer to pay. He didn’t compare me to the sun, or the stars, or anything else for that matter. He just said, “You’re ******* hot.” So we went to his place.
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Sep 25, 2010
Sep 25, 2010 at 6:15 PM UTC
Chivalry
I thought your poem was really sweet, but I just don’t think of you that way. Honestly, sometimes it’s too much: the endless proclamations, and the incessant compliments. Maybe if you were more like Paul -- We got dinner the other night, Applebees’ Ultimate Trio. Not once did he hold a door or offer to pay. He didn’t compare me to the sun, or the stars, or anything else for that matter. He just said, “You’re ******* hot.” So we went to his place.
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Sep 25, 2010
Sep 25, 2010 at 6:15 PM UTC
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