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You treat me too kindly Like a guest that you know But watch out with kindness Or I'll not want to go You talk and you listen On topics I care Not like in hostels Where same words we share Your flat is just awesome The views are a dream And with no complaint You keep it so clean And even folded my clothes Seriously, ease off with kindness Or I'll not want to go And now for the food Best not forget that Spoilt with flavour so good I'd eat till I'm fat You've made me feel wellcome Your house is my home You've taken me places Otherwise I'd not know I'm not quite sure now How best to thank But I've only got words Not much left in my bank I hope my words In some way can show You've been great and I'm thankful Much more than you'd know But now it's my turn to be kind to you So I think the time's come That I actually go!
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Feb 23, 2014
Feb 23, 2014 at 12:05 PM UTC
Thanks to Brendan
You treat me too kindly Like a guest that you know But watch out with kindness Or I'll not want to go You talk and you listen On topics I care Not like in hostels Where same words we share Your flat is just awesome The views are a dream And with no complaint You keep it so clean And even folded my clothes Seriously, ease off with kindness Or I'll not want to go And now for the food Best not forget that Spoilt with flavour so good I'd eat till I'm fat You've made me feel wellcome Your house is my home You've taken me places Otherwise I'd not know I'm not quite sure now How best to thank But I've only got words Not much left in my bank I hope my words In some way can show You've been great and I'm thankful Much more than you'd know But now it's my turn to be kind to you So I think the time's come That I actually go!
For my couchsurfing host in Surfers Paradise, Queensland, Australia. 10th December 2013
macstoire
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Feb 23, 2014
Feb 23, 2014 at 12:05 PM UTC
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