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when you lost your virginity, i remembered you were slightly glowing a halter neck dress under a fluorescent light. i didn't have any clothes on, just a brown blanket, and your brother's anger could almost be tasted drifting in the air like snapping crocodiles. what we really needed was more alcohol, but our vaults we're empty, so we settled with three embers burning brightly in the deepening night and the boy upstairs struggled to find his pants.
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Feb 20, 2014
Feb 20, 2014 at 10:44 AM UTC
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when you lost your virginity, i remembered you were slightly glowing a halter neck dress under a fluorescent light. i didn't have any clothes on, just a brown blanket, and your brother's anger could almost be tasted drifting in the air like snapping crocodiles. what we really needed was more alcohol, but our vaults we're empty, so we settled with three embers burning brightly in the deepening night and the boy upstairs struggled to find his pants.
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Feb 20, 2014
Feb 20, 2014 at 10:44 AM UTC
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