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i bumped into you at the supermarket i told you i ran out of food you asked what i was buying i said pudding and ramen you said i have a healthy diet i told you it encompassed all the major food groups you asked what the major food groups were i said pudding and ramen you laughed i laughed and we tripped into a kiss remind me to go to the supermarket after you get settled in at my aprtment or is it our apartment?
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Sep 20, 2010
Sep 20, 2010 at 4:48 PM UTC
Pudding and Ramen
i bumped into you at the supermarket i told you i ran out of food you asked what i was buying i said pudding and ramen you said i have a healthy diet i told you it encompassed all the major food groups you asked what the major food groups were i said pudding and ramen you laughed i laughed and we tripped into a kiss remind me to go to the supermarket after you get settled in at my aprtment or is it our apartment?
This is a little more prose than poem, but I would definetly like some critique!
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Sep 20, 2010
Sep 20, 2010 at 4:48 PM UTC
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