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We were lovers once, for all of time eternal. That's no fabrication, says old Sugarman; but that's a concretal fact. We spoke as friends, atop the canopy of rainforest. Costa Rican insight, we speak in tongues of delight, pushing, pulling, pushing upon desire - all the while smiling serenely into your ***** cocktail, aware of the pressing concerns into your later freedoms. We love. We love and love instantly. Skin baptised in humidity and rains rising in abundance across the steep valley of further treetop, fading to cloud beneath us. Beneath us is the world: unbounded and plenty. I settle eyes onto yours, stomach knotting, yet ensured, as smiles weep to emancipated longing, and this sheer belonging now felt for this; our Eden, cast upon Astral shores. In prophetic view of paradise, I pour water from a jug. Clear as mind, I see through solar nourishment, the expanse of all life, the life that crescendos each time you sip on your straw. Memory cleansed of all magnitude, now but fragmented thoughts of nothings and second-hand sentiments, I remember only the passage of our time up here, the balcony of heaven and of Earth combined. We kiss in the rays of Astral sunlight, brighter than the longest of our day! We sip red wine leant across the railings, your dress clings emphatically to the motions of your body. It becomes as if brutality never existed. I concede to life and its offerings for all. I kiss you greedy in the fast-fading sunlight, as the sky is re-birthed in the conception of tomorrow. I kiss you hard on the mouth as we survey the old kingdom of man, and these dying moments before our next subliminal fall. Please stay with me now in suspension, this devoted region of nature, of plumage and the removal of all sin. I am done with whiskey slurs and cigarette burns, of chasing zeros and memories unconfirmed. I am done with complaining about all of tomorrow, about all of the pound pound pound of the heart that resides in this chest, this useless vehicle of flesh, of matter born to die and innocence always corrupted. Please stay with me now, as I go down down down... please stay with me now, my new sight.
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Feb 13, 2014
Feb 13, 2014 at 9:31 PM UTC
Clouds That Pierce The Illusion
We were lovers once, for all of time eternal. That's no fabrication, says old Sugarman; but that's a concretal fact. We spoke as friends, atop the canopy of rainforest. Costa Rican insight, we speak in tongues of delight, pushing, pulling, pushing upon desire - all the while smiling serenely into your ***** cocktail, aware of the pressing concerns into your later freedoms. We love. We love and love instantly. Skin baptised in humidity and rains rising in abundance across the steep valley of further treetop, fading to cloud beneath us. Beneath us is the world: unbounded and plenty. I settle eyes onto yours, stomach knotting, yet ensured, as smiles weep to emancipated longing, and this sheer belonging now felt for this; our Eden, cast upon Astral shores. In prophetic view of paradise, I pour water from a jug. Clear as mind, I see through solar nourishment, the expanse of all life, the life that crescendos each time you sip on your straw. Memory cleansed of all magnitude, now but fragmented thoughts of nothings and second-hand sentiments, I remember only the passage of our time up here, the balcony of heaven and of Earth combined. We kiss in the rays of Astral sunlight, brighter than the longest of our day! We sip red wine leant across the railings, your dress clings emphatically to the motions of your body. It becomes as if brutality never existed. I concede to life and its offerings for all. I kiss you greedy in the fast-fading sunlight, as the sky is re-birthed in the conception of tomorrow. I kiss you hard on the mouth as we survey the old kingdom of man, and these dying moments before our next subliminal fall. Please stay with me now in suspension, this devoted region of nature, of plumage and the removal of all sin. I am done with whiskey slurs and cigarette burns, of chasing zeros and memories unconfirmed. I am done with complaining about all of tomorrow, about all of the pound pound pound of the heart that resides in this chest, this useless vehicle of flesh, of matter born to die and innocence always corrupted. Please stay with me now, as I go down down down... please stay with me now, my new sight.
© I notice quite a few of my poems are becoming optimistic. I don't know if that is insanity or the bettering of myself, but either way I feel that these are worth more in their sharing.
Edward-Coles
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26/M/English
Feb 13, 2014
Feb 13, 2014 at 9:31 PM UTC
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