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---round one. shatteredinathousandpieces-- beatenbrokenbruised-- anxiety. plagues me like a sailor's calling to the sea-- *will this-- will he-- always plague me?* i pray my God can redeem my heart-- LORD, if this is right, heal me. if this was a wrong decision, let me be corrected. i cannot trust my own desires. *i am a ship lost at sea; i have no harbor but my own Mast.* oh soul, how do you fare? oh mind, why do you run? does not all love cause pain? do not all relationships unfurl into discrepancies? *reconcile me-- my whole life has been a series of me following Your Call & responding as a man called to his Ninevah.* though the voyage be arduous, there is always Reward. ---round two. LORD, gutmeopen & make me yours&yoursalone--; i was meant for so much more than this turmoil-- redeem me-- make me yours. ---round three. i am a convict to my Savior & joyfully so-- may this river sweep me up & cleanse me so clean i can not bear to see pain-- my breathing uneven, only my soul remains-- my limbs so burdened with bloodshed & stings-- from the pain of carrying home too many things-- LORD GOD I SURRENDER-- i lash out against evil! awaken my soul, LORD, I NO LONGER TREMBLE. this heartbreak will not break me, these tears will not freeze, for my soul finds rest in this peace-- i'm REDEEMED.
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Feb 11, 2014
Feb 11, 2014 at 3:29 PM UTC
conviction [in tongues].
---round one. shatteredinathousandpieces-- beatenbrokenbruised-- anxiety. plagues me like a sailor's calling to the sea-- *will this-- will he-- always plague me?* i pray my God can redeem my heart-- LORD, if this is right, heal me. if this was a wrong decision, let me be corrected. i cannot trust my own desires. *i am a ship lost at sea; i have no harbor but my own Mast.* oh soul, how do you fare? oh mind, why do you run? does not all love cause pain? do not all relationships unfurl into discrepancies? *reconcile me-- my whole life has been a series of me following Your Call & responding as a man called to his Ninevah.* though the voyage be arduous, there is always Reward. ---round two. LORD, gutmeopen & make me yours&yoursalone--; i was meant for so much more than this turmoil-- redeem me-- make me yours. ---round three. i am a convict to my Savior & joyfully so-- may this river sweep me up & cleanse me so clean i can not bear to see pain-- my breathing uneven, only my soul remains-- my limbs so burdened with bloodshed & stings-- from the pain of carrying home too many things-- LORD GOD I SURRENDER-- i lash out against evil! awaken my soul, LORD, I NO LONGER TREMBLE. this heartbreak will not break me, these tears will not freeze, for my soul finds rest in this peace-- i'm REDEEMED.
pt. 2 in my endeavour to write in tongues.
dorothylynn
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Feb 11, 2014
Feb 11, 2014 at 3:29 PM UTC
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