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On February 5th : I am learning how to drive in between metamorphoses of snowy colors. On February 5th : If you look closely you can see my mother with her legs firmly planted onto the passenger seat; she is silent until we pass a collection of deer. We pass a collection of deer and my mother’s arms look the same as mine do when I am angry. Her face is the Atlantic, full of irritable little wrinkles. (My mother’s face is always the Atlantic, full of irritable little wrinkles.) When I was younger her wrinkles screamed at me with over-used lungs until my body grew limp like radish roots -- it’s just that when I was younger I had trouble seeing the large gap between snow and static no matter how many times my mother would try to emphasize their differences. But both dripped onto my prickly face like newborn wine onto sidewalks; both looked just like my mother’s old wedding dress.
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Feb 11, 2014
Feb 11, 2014 at 2:43 PM UTC
Polarities
On February 5th : I am learning how to drive in between metamorphoses of snowy colors. On February 5th : If you look closely you can see my mother with her legs firmly planted onto the passenger seat; she is silent until we pass a collection of deer. We pass a collection of deer and my mother’s arms look the same as mine do when I am angry. Her face is the Atlantic, full of irritable little wrinkles. (My mother’s face is always the Atlantic, full of irritable little wrinkles.) When I was younger her wrinkles screamed at me with over-used lungs until my body grew limp like radish roots -- it’s just that when I was younger I had trouble seeing the large gap between snow and static no matter how many times my mother would try to emphasize their differences. But both dripped onto my prickly face like newborn wine onto sidewalks; both looked just like my mother’s old wedding dress.
this isn't very good, sorry
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Feb 11, 2014
Feb 11, 2014 at 2:43 PM UTC
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