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Writing, Scribbling down, Such choices we make, Edging the sliding doors of life, Running, walking, or turning away, How odd, these bold decisions, Life-changing options, Not bold at all, taken on a whim, And yet, yet, they guide, hmm, Saturating our souls, hearts, our minds, With more permanence than we know, Can ever know, for who can know, What will become of us; any of us? Are we indelibly tattooed, all of us? Perhaps, and fate and destiny are dust, Lives become intertwined, tightly bound, Inextricably linked, so, so tight, Through little more than pen and ink, And on we flow, downstream, Not, going with the flow, no, Only ‘dead-fish’ go with the flow, But ‘current drifting’ observing, Before plunging beneath the surface, Tugging the legs of the serene swan, Playfully, cajolingly, teasingly, Before emerging, drying off, Thinking, choosing, acting, Scribbling down, Writing. © Paul Chafer 2014 My poem was inspired by the poem below by Amanda FH. We Are Art The choices we make The life-changing ones Are indelibly etched on our hearts and souls and skin. Every decision is a making, a changing, I am tattooed And so are you. Let's compare our pictures And tell each other stories. Make notes on me I'm still a choice Waiting to be branded Let your ink flow.
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Feb 11, 2014
Feb 11, 2014 at 10:45 AM UTC
Let Your Ink Flow
Writing, Scribbling down, Such choices we make, Edging the sliding doors of life, Running, walking, or turning away, How odd, these bold decisions, Life-changing options, Not bold at all, taken on a whim, And yet, yet, they guide, hmm, Saturating our souls, hearts, our minds, With more permanence than we know, Can ever know, for who can know, What will become of us; any of us? Are we indelibly tattooed, all of us? Perhaps, and fate and destiny are dust, Lives become intertwined, tightly bound, Inextricably linked, so, so tight, Through little more than pen and ink, And on we flow, downstream, Not, going with the flow, no, Only ‘dead-fish’ go with the flow, But ‘current drifting’ observing, Before plunging beneath the surface, Tugging the legs of the serene swan, Playfully, cajolingly, teasingly, Before emerging, drying off, Thinking, choosing, acting, Scribbling down, Writing. © Paul Chafer 2014 My poem was inspired by the poem below by Amanda FH. We Are Art The choices we make The life-changing ones Are indelibly etched on our hearts and souls and skin. Every decision is a making, a changing, I am tattooed And so are you. Let's compare our pictures And tell each other stories. Make notes on me I'm still a choice Waiting to be branded Let your ink flow.
Dedicated to Amanda FH: a response to and inspired by her poem, We Are Art
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Feb 11, 2014
Feb 11, 2014 at 10:45 AM UTC
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