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Let's recreate The beautiful moment That I believe I fell in love with you. It was November the second, Two thousand thirteen And of all days, It was a band competition. An important one, A Bands of America Regional In the lovely St. George, Utah. I don't remember the weather, And I don't know whether Or not it's the same for you, But this is what I recollect: We had performed in finals, As we were so surprised to do so Our preliminary performance Not being so great. But finals was great. It was my best performance so far And that feeling I felt When I stepped off that turf; Magical. We put our instruments onto our semi "Optimus Pride," as we call it We put our hats away And received instructions to go get dinner. I found you immediately I believe promising you to hang out After we stepped off So I could tell you how everything would go down You're a freshman, after all Your first BOA. I had been telling you all sorts of little Tips and tricks this season anyway And you were willing to listen and take heed. Anyway, We met up. And we both felt this Hype. A most magical Hype. A high higher than any high from any drug And we were crazed; Band does this sort of thing so some, such as us. And so we went around Hugging others who were also feeling the Hype And talking about hopes of high placements For Full Retreat, And how I had promised you We would go around and talk to the other bands And go meet their trombone sections But I remember In the Hype The look that was in your beautiful eyes Almost a craze And in love sort of look. And that was when I realized you've finally found the magic. That was when I knew you were in love with this dorky activity Just as much as I. And that was what made me fall in love with you. That look. And it wasn't even reserved for me But I knew you felt passionate about something That I too felt passion for. That look. Now that I've been thinking about it, I can't get it out of my head. That look. Now that I've been thinking about it, I realized I haven't seen it since then For whatever reason. And I miss it. I want to see it again. I need to see it again. And it is lovely and all what that look was originally meant for But I'm hopelessly wishing That that look could Be reserved for me And that that look meant that You were in love with me. But of course, Things almost never work in my favor, And that's okay I'll get over it And until then, I'll see that look Whenever I close my eyes And relish the memories I have Of that wonderful Autumn day. That you for sharing that moment with me.
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Feb 9, 2014
Feb 9, 2014 at 11:09 PM UTC
The Hype That Left Feelings
Let's recreate The beautiful moment That I believe I fell in love with you. It was November the second, Two thousand thirteen And of all days, It was a band competition. An important one, A Bands of America Regional In the lovely St. George, Utah. I don't remember the weather, And I don't know whether Or not it's the same for you, But this is what I recollect: We had performed in finals, As we were so surprised to do so Our preliminary performance Not being so great. But finals was great. It was my best performance so far And that feeling I felt When I stepped off that turf; Magical. We put our instruments onto our semi "Optimus Pride," as we call it We put our hats away And received instructions to go get dinner. I found you immediately I believe promising you to hang out After we stepped off So I could tell you how everything would go down You're a freshman, after all Your first BOA. I had been telling you all sorts of little Tips and tricks this season anyway And you were willing to listen and take heed. Anyway, We met up. And we both felt this Hype. A most magical Hype. A high higher than any high from any drug And we were crazed; Band does this sort of thing so some, such as us. And so we went around Hugging others who were also feeling the Hype And talking about hopes of high placements For Full Retreat, And how I had promised you We would go around and talk to the other bands And go meet their trombone sections But I remember In the Hype The look that was in your beautiful eyes Almost a craze And in love sort of look. And that was when I realized you've finally found the magic. That was when I knew you were in love with this dorky activity Just as much as I. And that was what made me fall in love with you. That look. And it wasn't even reserved for me But I knew you felt passionate about something That I too felt passion for. That look. Now that I've been thinking about it, I can't get it out of my head. That look. Now that I've been thinking about it, I realized I haven't seen it since then For whatever reason. And I miss it. I want to see it again. I need to see it again. And it is lovely and all what that look was originally meant for But I'm hopelessly wishing That that look could Be reserved for me And that that look meant that You were in love with me. But of course, Things almost never work in my favor, And that's okay I'll get over it And until then, I'll see that look Whenever I close my eyes And relish the memories I have Of that wonderful Autumn day. That you for sharing that moment with me.
This is a bit of a personal one, but I was thinking about my favorite memories from this past marching season, and this one pulled up as number one. I felt the need to share this beautiful moment with you all. Enjoy.
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Feb 9, 2014
Feb 9, 2014 at 11:09 PM UTC
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