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Hello, four walled cedar room encased with dirt and idle worms. A place for quiet; the last great march to victory. The tag on your toe will be the only remaining mark of true identity, lest someone you once loved possibly loved you in return enough to claim a vacant version of yourself. Most will lament to the former you a select few will only feel ****** and slather pity if only only for a moment over spritzer and finger foods. They can't possibly comprehend that the exit was brilliant beyond words; that your chalk outline was significantly different. Than the others. No one can fathom what you must have gone through to get to this point. The careful consideration that went into planning such an exit. How to anticipate their grief, or the planning that goes in to remedy that. We can only assume the recently dead revel in the envisage of how strange it is to watch the artful way that others fall apart around you.
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Feb 5, 2014
Feb 5, 2014 at 3:46 AM UTC
The Funeral.
Hello, four walled cedar room encased with dirt and idle worms. A place for quiet; the last great march to victory. The tag on your toe will be the only remaining mark of true identity, lest someone you once loved possibly loved you in return enough to claim a vacant version of yourself. Most will lament to the former you a select few will only feel ****** and slather pity if only only for a moment over spritzer and finger foods. They can't possibly comprehend that the exit was brilliant beyond words; that your chalk outline was significantly different. Than the others. No one can fathom what you must have gone through to get to this point. The careful consideration that went into planning such an exit. How to anticipate their grief, or the planning that goes in to remedy that. We can only assume the recently dead revel in the envisage of how strange it is to watch the artful way that others fall apart around you.
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Feb 5, 2014
Feb 5, 2014 at 3:46 AM UTC
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