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dear lord we are on rough waters of a pool of saliva you produced while sleep walking and only in your sleep do you acknowledge my existence through blind retort blue-glowing retort I am the sail and will decide the direction and you are the wind propelling us into jagged rocks and jagged water your crew has abandoned ship and you are a whirlpool and eventually your twitching eyes darting eyes sleep walking eyes will creak under crusty cement and you will too acknowledge the ship you destroyed on jagged rocks and rough waters
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 8:48 AM UTC
rough waters
dear lord we are on rough waters of a pool of saliva you produced while sleep walking and only in your sleep do you acknowledge my existence through blind retort blue-glowing retort I am the sail and will decide the direction and you are the wind propelling us into jagged rocks and jagged water your crew has abandoned ship and you are a whirlpool and eventually your twitching eyes darting eyes sleep walking eyes will creak under crusty cement and you will too acknowledge the ship you destroyed on jagged rocks and rough waters
liz-paola
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Feb 3, 2014
Feb 3, 2014 at 8:48 AM UTC
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