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I read stories of women, dressed in silk and wool, quiet, passive, faceless ladies defined only by their spontaneous romances with strangers on trains, who dug out childish notions in their heads, as they forsook their loving husbands of twenty years for slick haired young men, who pretend not to mind their sagging ******* Madam Bovarys for a modern age. Afraid of fading youth, dying embers, bringing up the same high school insecurities, they felt when their prom date flirted with the cheerleading captain. And quenching them just as quickly when they fogged up the windows of his father's car. But maybe I should keep quiet. What do I know? A thin, ****** school girl, who has known little of passion, but some of love. And when I learned love, I learned loyalty.
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Jan 29, 2014
Jan 29, 2014 at 9:53 PM UTC
A Literature Critique
I read stories of women, dressed in silk and wool, quiet, passive, faceless ladies defined only by their spontaneous romances with strangers on trains, who dug out childish notions in their heads, as they forsook their loving husbands of twenty years for slick haired young men, who pretend not to mind their sagging ******* Madam Bovarys for a modern age. Afraid of fading youth, dying embers, bringing up the same high school insecurities, they felt when their prom date flirted with the cheerleading captain. And quenching them just as quickly when they fogged up the windows of his father's car. But maybe I should keep quiet. What do I know? A thin, ****** school girl, who has known little of passion, but some of love. And when I learned love, I learned loyalty.
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Jan 29, 2014
Jan 29, 2014 at 9:53 PM UTC
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