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Last year, was too much waiting at dull bus stops on rainy sunday afternoons. And little rambling in the sun. Expectations too high and moments in vain. This year, there will be no pointless promises of ever red roses in winter snow. And no shy water in these eyes. Remember that these castles belong in the air.
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Jan 28, 2014
Jan 28, 2014 at 4:55 PM UTC
This Year
Last year, was too much waiting at dull bus stops on rainy sunday afternoons. And little rambling in the sun. Expectations too high and moments in vain. This year, there will be no pointless promises of ever red roses in winter snow. And no shy water in these eyes. Remember that these castles belong in the air.
Just something I came up with. Is this any good?
bluelips
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Norwegian
Jan 28, 2014
Jan 28, 2014 at 4:55 PM UTC
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