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There was a boy who loved a girl And that girl adored that boy The boy was happy and loved himself The girl was full of self hatred and couldn't feel any joy He didn't understand why she hated herself, couldn't she see he loved her even if she was depressed? She couldn't understand why he liked her, couldn't he see she was a mess? "You're such a narcissist." She'd laugh but she was secretly jealous And she wondered how it felt to like yourself She was amazed at how he always seemed to overestimate her abilities He was stunned at how she always seemed to underestimate herself She knew he deserved better though and tried to retract But they were too in love and this is proof that Opposites really do attract
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Jan 26, 2014
Jan 26, 2014 at 11:40 AM UTC
The Depressed Girl, And The Narcissistic Boy
There was a boy who loved a girl And that girl adored that boy The boy was happy and loved himself The girl was full of self hatred and couldn't feel any joy He didn't understand why she hated herself, couldn't she see he loved her even if she was depressed? She couldn't understand why he liked her, couldn't he see she was a mess? "You're such a narcissist." She'd laugh but she was secretly jealous And she wondered how it felt to like yourself She was amazed at how he always seemed to overestimate her abilities He was stunned at how she always seemed to underestimate herself She knew he deserved better though and tried to retract But they were too in love and this is proof that Opposites really do attract
My boyfriend and I have this running gag where he'll pretend to be self absorbed and have a huge ego and I thought it was weird how when it came to how we felt about ourselves, we were so different and so I wrote this. Not one of my best but I think it's okay. I dedicate this to Nick, for loving me even when I hated myself. He's also not really a narcissist.
theia-gwen
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Jan 26, 2014
Jan 26, 2014 at 11:40 AM UTC
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