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I felt you the minute I met you I felt your skin for the first time and my world slowed down I felt it over again until everything was hazy with dew and morning light I felt your eyes on me, watching my every move I felt the words that you said-and allowed you in I felt your hair in my hands and your mattress with no sheets I felt you breathe in early hours clumsily finding me through twisted blankets I felt you say those vile words and let down my guard completely I felt me lose control and then I felt the uneasiness in your movements I felt the vagueness in your every word I felt me losing you I felt me losing it I felt myself say words I never meant I felt like making you feel I felt your shame that night, the uneven stare and lack of ambition I felt my wet cheeks and shaking hands I felt every nerve in my body become exposed I felt our talk about 'us' weeks later-how we are going to end up together, "theres just so much love" I felt empty words I felt you pull off my clothes and **** me on the couch I felt you leave i don't want to feel you anymore.
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Jan 24, 2014
Jan 24, 2014 at 2:11 PM UTC
j.b.
I felt you the minute I met you I felt your skin for the first time and my world slowed down I felt it over again until everything was hazy with dew and morning light I felt your eyes on me, watching my every move I felt the words that you said-and allowed you in I felt your hair in my hands and your mattress with no sheets I felt you breathe in early hours clumsily finding me through twisted blankets I felt you say those vile words and let down my guard completely I felt me lose control and then I felt the uneasiness in your movements I felt the vagueness in your every word I felt me losing you I felt me losing it I felt myself say words I never meant I felt like making you feel I felt your shame that night, the uneven stare and lack of ambition I felt my wet cheeks and shaking hands I felt every nerve in my body become exposed I felt our talk about 'us' weeks later-how we are going to end up together, "theres just so much love" I felt empty words I felt you pull off my clothes and **** me on the couch I felt you leave i don't want to feel you anymore.
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Jan 24, 2014
Jan 24, 2014 at 2:11 PM UTC
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