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I want to write a bad poem A cringe worthy, generic, forgettable poem Maybe something along the lines of...                        ...your bruised arms around me                                    left a hole where my heart should have been.... That was a good first attempt at bad, I reckon. I shall litter said poem with words I found in a thesaurus, (iridescent, luminous, diabolical, sacrilegious, egregious etc.) and elements of nature, (infinite blue skies, bubbling starfish pond, burnt autumn leaves) and vague ****** references, (satin bedsheets, steamy phone booths, glistening skin) and unremarkable idiosyncrasies of past lovers (you always filled your pockets with loose change; you always peeled the apple bottom-up; you always blahd the blooh blah with your blah-like personality) and lastly, but most importantly,   the stray allusions to a life of tortuous heartache and unfulfilled dreams. Zzzzzzzzzzz
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Sep 10, 2010
Sep 10, 2010 at 5:18 PM UTC
A Bad Poem
I want to write a bad poem A cringe worthy, generic, forgettable poem Maybe something along the lines of...                        ...your bruised arms around me                                    left a hole where my heart should have been.... That was a good first attempt at bad, I reckon. I shall litter said poem with words I found in a thesaurus, (iridescent, luminous, diabolical, sacrilegious, egregious etc.) and elements of nature, (infinite blue skies, bubbling starfish pond, burnt autumn leaves) and vague ****** references, (satin bedsheets, steamy phone booths, glistening skin) and unremarkable idiosyncrasies of past lovers (you always filled your pockets with loose change; you always peeled the apple bottom-up; you always blahd the blooh blah with your blah-like personality) and lastly, but most importantly,   the stray allusions to a life of tortuous heartache and unfulfilled dreams. Zzzzzzzzzzz
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Sep 10, 2010
Sep 10, 2010 at 5:18 PM UTC
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