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somedays i think about the stars and how insignificant my feelings are when im six feet under the universe wont care who i loved my brain is made up of minuscule neurons infinitesimal to the galaxies swirling around us but somedays i think about my mind and how my emotions strive to pull me under i remember how much ive learned about the universe and the capacity my brain actually holds its the most powerful thing ive ever known, and ive only discovered a fraction of it and then i wonder if there's a universe underneath my skull my mind is a black hole ******* in information i'd be better off not knowing enclosing on me with darkness until i want to die it blocks out all the light and leaves me blind my mind is the sun bright and glowing overflowing with delight giving warmth and energy to everything in sight racing faster than the speed of light so fast i feel my head will explode and sometimes i wish it would. my mind is an empty space filled with neither joy nor pain just longing for a star to form or a black hole anything at all
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Jan 23, 2014
Jan 23, 2014 at 1:40 AM UTC
the universe beneath my skull
somedays i think about the stars and how insignificant my feelings are when im six feet under the universe wont care who i loved my brain is made up of minuscule neurons infinitesimal to the galaxies swirling around us but somedays i think about my mind and how my emotions strive to pull me under i remember how much ive learned about the universe and the capacity my brain actually holds its the most powerful thing ive ever known, and ive only discovered a fraction of it and then i wonder if there's a universe underneath my skull my mind is a black hole ******* in information i'd be better off not knowing enclosing on me with darkness until i want to die it blocks out all the light and leaves me blind my mind is the sun bright and glowing overflowing with delight giving warmth and energy to everything in sight racing faster than the speed of light so fast i feel my head will explode and sometimes i wish it would. my mind is an empty space filled with neither joy nor pain just longing for a star to form or a black hole anything at all
this can be a lot better. ill work on it. rough draft for now. constructive criticism is greatly appreciated
anna-22
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Jan 23, 2014
Jan 23, 2014 at 1:40 AM UTC
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