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It felt like spinning. Like when you hold onto someone's hands and spin as fast as you can It's a mutual trust, for if one person let's go, the other will fall. It was scary, and thrilling, and constantly spinning. That's what our love felt like. Like a machine of perpetual motion, spinning faster and faster holding on tighter and tighter Slipping more and more. It left me dizzy and sick like the Tilt-a-Whirl carnival ride you kissed me on with your mouth sweet from cotton candy and your palms sweaty from the July heat; But this time I did not have your arm there to steady me
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Jan 20, 2014
Jan 20, 2014 at 3:14 AM UTC
Perpetual Motion
It felt like spinning. Like when you hold onto someone's hands and spin as fast as you can It's a mutual trust, for if one person let's go, the other will fall. It was scary, and thrilling, and constantly spinning. That's what our love felt like. Like a machine of perpetual motion, spinning faster and faster holding on tighter and tighter Slipping more and more. It left me dizzy and sick like the Tilt-a-Whirl carnival ride you kissed me on with your mouth sweet from cotton candy and your palms sweaty from the July heat; But this time I did not have your arm there to steady me
katie-lorenzo
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Jan 20, 2014
Jan 20, 2014 at 3:14 AM UTC
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