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I need a sharp paper-thin note. Stretched     taught and dried eyes staring. Feathers Dipped in red and put to parchment. A bird's surprise to carry a message a call. A warning to flee, now fly, and bring the men galloping. Escape was a factor A pipe dream unfair. To trumpet's song, and ****** battlefields bathed, enriched in history. To be told and retold.
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Jan 20, 2014
Jan 20, 2014 at 1:35 AM UTC
Deer Death
I need a sharp paper-thin note. Stretched     taught and dried eyes staring. Feathers Dipped in red and put to parchment. A bird's surprise to carry a message a call. A warning to flee, now fly, and bring the men galloping. Escape was a factor A pipe dream unfair. To trumpet's song, and ****** battlefields bathed, enriched in history. To be told and retold.
I just wrote. I didn't read it, didn't think about the whole. Just stanza by stanza, so it's probably pretty terrible right now. And now the title. But I don't recall what exactly I just wrote. So, I guess I will call it "Deer Death." As my own double meaning, play on words, with visualization that doesn't quite make sense. You don't have the full picture, but feel free to fill in, and color your own into my words.
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Jan 20, 2014
Jan 20, 2014 at 1:35 AM UTC
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