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I remember The first time I told you that I loved you We spent the whole day together And I was so tired And you walked me to my car I sat sideways in the front seat, door open, facing you And we kissed And just as you were about to close the door I said it It took all that I had It felt like I had breathed my last breath I was so nervous I wanted to explode And the two seconds between the time when I said it and when you said it back Was the most agonizing time of my life And when I drove away I cried I cried out of pure joy and love for you And that was the best day of my life
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Jan 19, 2014
Jan 19, 2014 at 12:41 AM UTC
the first time
I remember The first time I told you that I loved you We spent the whole day together And I was so tired And you walked me to my car I sat sideways in the front seat, door open, facing you And we kissed And just as you were about to close the door I said it It took all that I had It felt like I had breathed my last breath I was so nervous I wanted to explode And the two seconds between the time when I said it and when you said it back Was the most agonizing time of my life And when I drove away I cried I cried out of pure joy and love for you And that was the best day of my life
melissa-calopiz
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Jan 19, 2014
Jan 19, 2014 at 12:41 AM UTC
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