i tried to write a poem today about how you make me feel,
and i couldn't put it into words
- it was unwordable -
my absolute lack of verbosity and eloquence left no solace - just a sticky shimmering mess of words splattered, scattered with horrible verbs and even worse poeticness...
needless to say you give me such inspiration that my mind just veers left when directed right, all because you
- you make me melt -
and fall apart.
and with a touch i make your body tremor and mind falter - together we make the universe twirl, i can feel it, the breakdown of words is my mind spinning around your universe, your works, you're everything the barriers broken, my words fly and float in the pace of our romance, lost...
- and my brain just broke -
Jan 18, 2014
Jan 18, 2014 at 4:34 PM UTC
i tried to write a poem today about how you make me feel,
and i couldn't put it into words
- it was unwordable -
my absolute lack of verbosity and eloquence left no solace - just a sticky shimmering mess of words splattered, scattered with horrible verbs and even worse poeticness...
needless to say you give me such inspiration that my mind just veers left when directed right, all because you
- you make me melt -
and fall apart.
and with a touch i make your body tremor and mind falter - together we make the universe twirl, i can feel it, the breakdown of words is my mind spinning around your universe, your works, you're everything the barriers broken, my words fly and float in the pace of our romance, lost...
- and my brain just broke -
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