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You had beautiful eyes not that I noticed at first first thing I saw was your feet worn out black running shoes shuffling down the isle fleece pajama pants with Calgary Flames logos all over though it was pushing 30 degrees outside and felt as if you could squeeze warm drops of water from the air looking up as you stopped blue and orange plaid criss crossed a winter jacket despite the weather your skin was tanned, not orange you smelled of shampoo and vanilla lotion watching as you pulled out cherry lip gloss ran slender fingers over your shaved head that was when you looked up... as if you knew I'd been staring I thought of a thousand reactions you gave the only one I hadn't expected then I noticed your eyes just as the light came thought the window they were brown, or maybe more like honey fragmented emeralds drifting though them you smiled and said nothing not that you needed too it was one of those moment that was better without words would have been tarnished by them where everything stopped completely and all I could think was ...wow... nothing else happened to disturb that second it just stretched on no one else moved or made a sound I knew then that you were one of those people you lit rooms with a glance the one that others were drawn to fell in love with even if you didn't love them back and wrote beautiful things about I couldnt help but smile back you were contagious beautiful the train stopped you left I stayed and watched watched you watching me through the window smiling as though you had heard my thoughts you knew I had really seen you I understood I would never see you again our meeting was chance but all the same for just a second I was in love with a beautiful stranger
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Jan 17, 2014
Jan 17, 2014 at 5:02 AM UTC
A beautiful stranger
You had beautiful eyes not that I noticed at first first thing I saw was your feet worn out black running shoes shuffling down the isle fleece pajama pants with Calgary Flames logos all over though it was pushing 30 degrees outside and felt as if you could squeeze warm drops of water from the air looking up as you stopped blue and orange plaid criss crossed a winter jacket despite the weather your skin was tanned, not orange you smelled of shampoo and vanilla lotion watching as you pulled out cherry lip gloss ran slender fingers over your shaved head that was when you looked up... as if you knew I'd been staring I thought of a thousand reactions you gave the only one I hadn't expected then I noticed your eyes just as the light came thought the window they were brown, or maybe more like honey fragmented emeralds drifting though them you smiled and said nothing not that you needed too it was one of those moment that was better without words would have been tarnished by them where everything stopped completely and all I could think was ...wow... nothing else happened to disturb that second it just stretched on no one else moved or made a sound I knew then that you were one of those people you lit rooms with a glance the one that others were drawn to fell in love with even if you didn't love them back and wrote beautiful things about I couldnt help but smile back you were contagious beautiful the train stopped you left I stayed and watched watched you watching me through the window smiling as though you had heard my thoughts you knew I had really seen you I understood I would never see you again our meeting was chance but all the same for just a second I was in love with a beautiful stranger
sam-greig-mohns
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Jan 17, 2014
Jan 17, 2014 at 5:02 AM UTC
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