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When i read your poems I am happy to see that love is still among many even though it may be hard to see… striving to make sense of our feelings our deep and inner dispositions when we are presented with this thing, this thing, someone named "love" because people with there beaten and broken hearts the medication, alcohol and ailments do not heal or stop this predicament… it is so hard to see the light my friends, look beyond the situation everything is as meant to be. though hard to see your life is held in the palm of a hand whose gentle care will never end so raise your head and stand up tall you are one among all whose hearts have been broken but you, this individual my friend, you are for I am a witness to say, you are a blessing to me every day
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Jan 13, 2014
Jan 13, 2014 at 10:04 PM UTC
I, the traveler
When i read your poems I am happy to see that love is still among many even though it may be hard to see… striving to make sense of our feelings our deep and inner dispositions when we are presented with this thing, this thing, someone named "love" because people with there beaten and broken hearts the medication, alcohol and ailments do not heal or stop this predicament… it is so hard to see the light my friends, look beyond the situation everything is as meant to be. though hard to see your life is held in the palm of a hand whose gentle care will never end so raise your head and stand up tall you are one among all whose hearts have been broken but you, this individual my friend, you are for I am a witness to say, you are a blessing to me every day
addressing those who are down spirited. your heart will soon be happy
sophie-monigatti-lake
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Jan 13, 2014
Jan 13, 2014 at 10:04 PM UTC
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