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His smile made it all ok His charred flesh didn’t matter I didn’t see the scars His eyes no longer danced Nor did they see me at all But his smile made it all ok His soul was full of hate He hardly spoke to me But on the scarce occasion His smile made it all ok He could no longer walk And didn’t want kids So they wouldn’t be ashamed Of their crippled father I agreed wishing I hadn’t But he hugged me And thanked me And smiled And his smile made it all ok And years went on And we never had kids We never went to a graduation Or a class play We never got mother’s day gifts But over the years he smiled more And his smile made everything ok
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Sep 6, 2010
Sep 6, 2010 at 7:56 PM UTC
His Smile
His smile made it all ok His charred flesh didn’t matter I didn’t see the scars His eyes no longer danced Nor did they see me at all But his smile made it all ok His soul was full of hate He hardly spoke to me But on the scarce occasion His smile made it all ok He could no longer walk And didn’t want kids So they wouldn’t be ashamed Of their crippled father I agreed wishing I hadn’t But he hugged me And thanked me And smiled And his smile made it all ok And years went on And we never had kids We never went to a graduation Or a class play We never got mother’s day gifts But over the years he smiled more And his smile made everything ok
Basically this is based after a fire that almost took this girl's husband's life. It's not very good, but I wrote a short story similar and a lot of people liked it.
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Sep 6, 2010
Sep 6, 2010 at 7:56 PM UTC
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