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The door was cracked.. And in a dark shower, I was visited upon by horrendous visions, demons of changelings, melting and reforming. My Door opened and I released until, coming into focus, I saw the core of me: an imperfectly smooth shorestone, not yet made experienced by the shorebreak. I released again in the darkness, and was regarded, and nearly greeted by a young deer. She was still, but perhaps not peaceful. I faced myself and released, and saw feathers. I felt them follow my shape. I felt growth. With another release I saw an alligator, which I tried to distance. Until I saw it's eyes. The two animals were not friends, were not enemies. I breathed, and lingered in the darkness. I thanked God, and stopped the water.
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Sep 6, 2010
Sep 6, 2010 at 1:06 AM UTC
Blind Tile Breakthrough (2 of 2)
The door was cracked.. And in a dark shower, I was visited upon by horrendous visions, demons of changelings, melting and reforming. My Door opened and I released until, coming into focus, I saw the core of me: an imperfectly smooth shorestone, not yet made experienced by the shorebreak. I released again in the darkness, and was regarded, and nearly greeted by a young deer. She was still, but perhaps not peaceful. I faced myself and released, and saw feathers. I felt them follow my shape. I felt growth. With another release I saw an alligator, which I tried to distance. Until I saw it's eyes. The two animals were not friends, were not enemies. I breathed, and lingered in the darkness. I thanked God, and stopped the water.
Work in progress but was still compelled to post
keith-ren
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Sep 6, 2010
Sep 6, 2010 at 1:06 AM UTC
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