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As I drift on the edge of sleep Where my desires and reality converge Like wet sand on the beach Left behind by the receding tide To either fizzle out slowly in summer's sun Or be blown dry by winter's wind Bubbles of foam seep out from beneath the grains They form thoughts, and then they pop... Silently. Does a bubble make a sound when it pops? Do we care about the demise of such a fragile object? Aren't our lives just like a bubble? My eyelids flutter open and closed Micro-sleep is only a term that constantly awake people use If we're supposed to sleep a third of our lives Where does the difference in the estimated time go? Moments in this wee hour of night or morning Where I'm drowning in a sky of my own thoughts Am I really alive? Or is this a lucid dream? The answer is unknown I'm already asleep
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Jan 7, 2014
Jan 7, 2014 at 4:15 AM UTC
"'Insomnia with Double Quotes'"
As I drift on the edge of sleep Where my desires and reality converge Like wet sand on the beach Left behind by the receding tide To either fizzle out slowly in summer's sun Or be blown dry by winter's wind Bubbles of foam seep out from beneath the grains They form thoughts, and then they pop... Silently. Does a bubble make a sound when it pops? Do we care about the demise of such a fragile object? Aren't our lives just like a bubble? My eyelids flutter open and closed Micro-sleep is only a term that constantly awake people use If we're supposed to sleep a third of our lives Where does the difference in the estimated time go? Moments in this wee hour of night or morning Where I'm drowning in a sky of my own thoughts Am I really alive? Or is this a lucid dream? The answer is unknown I'm already asleep
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Jan 7, 2014
Jan 7, 2014 at 4:15 AM UTC
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