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Did you have a good life when you died? One worthy of countless reproductions? Did they make a film dedicated to your memory? Did it begin with your first hallowed breath? And end with your satisfied huff? Did they cast a guy one hundred times better looking than you? To play the character... Of you? If not, then what were you doing? Your whole life, gone, and they didn't even consider a film version of your first birthday? Did anyone even know your name? Did anyone even give a **** you were in the same room? Did they know your middle name? Why wouldn't they? It's too bad because it could've been great It really could have been a good one A good life But no I don't know what you did with it But now it's gone **** Zap Done You're dead
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 8:38 AM UTC
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Did you have a good life when you died? One worthy of countless reproductions? Did they make a film dedicated to your memory? Did it begin with your first hallowed breath? And end with your satisfied huff? Did they cast a guy one hundred times better looking than you? To play the character... Of you? If not, then what were you doing? Your whole life, gone, and they didn't even consider a film version of your first birthday? Did anyone even know your name? Did anyone even give a **** you were in the same room? Did they know your middle name? Why wouldn't they? It's too bad because it could've been great It really could have been a good one A good life But no I don't know what you did with it But now it's gone **** Zap Done You're dead
john-vd
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28/M/American
Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 8:38 AM UTC
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