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This year we were not alone. In convoy by car, and now on a lower path, past the ruined cottages with their sagging brickwork past redemption, we had formed a line hard on a hedged path towards a distant wood. And all the while a child, a child we loved and cared for, savaged anything in reach with a pair of sticks. As a delicate rain fell, the aggressive shout of wood on wood. numbed the senses. There seemed no end to this wanton litany of violence and aggressive hurt. For an hour or more this child, this child we loved and cared for, had been denied the living world of the backlit screen. Was there really nothing worthy of attention here? So dull and damp and dreary were these empty fields, this persistent woodland.
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 7:14 AM UTC
Wood on Wood
This year we were not alone. In convoy by car, and now on a lower path, past the ruined cottages with their sagging brickwork past redemption, we had formed a line hard on a hedged path towards a distant wood. And all the while a child, a child we loved and cared for, savaged anything in reach with a pair of sticks. As a delicate rain fell, the aggressive shout of wood on wood. numbed the senses. There seemed no end to this wanton litany of violence and aggressive hurt. For an hour or more this child, this child we loved and cared for, had been denied the living world of the backlit screen. Was there really nothing worthy of attention here? So dull and damp and dreary were these empty fields, this persistent woodland.
nigel-morgan
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 7:14 AM UTC
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