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My eyes have been opened To what's in front of me Seen now as what it truly is No more notions dipped in honey Or hopes dripping poison Slowly killing my peace of mind Taking away the last piece of my smile That remained genuine You're oblivious To the restless emotional tide You stirred up the first time you said Hi Or the way you engulfed my mind With feelings I thought I got rid of yesterday But I was tossed back to sea today when you spoke You don't know How hard I tried Tactfully I kept a veil over my eyes So I wouldn't see the blatant lies Appearing untouched by your smile If only in public For in private I continued hoping ...you would open your eyes   And see I was worthy . Undeserving you were of my thoughts
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 2:58 AM UTC
Metaphors For My Thoughts
My eyes have been opened To what's in front of me Seen now as what it truly is No more notions dipped in honey Or hopes dripping poison Slowly killing my peace of mind Taking away the last piece of my smile That remained genuine You're oblivious To the restless emotional tide You stirred up the first time you said Hi Or the way you engulfed my mind With feelings I thought I got rid of yesterday But I was tossed back to sea today when you spoke You don't know How hard I tried Tactfully I kept a veil over my eyes So I wouldn't see the blatant lies Appearing untouched by your smile If only in public For in private I continued hoping ...you would open your eyes   And see I was worthy . Undeserving you were of my thoughts
heather-sarrazin
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Jan 3, 2014
Jan 3, 2014 at 2:58 AM UTC
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