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Fate, fate, fate well what an awful mess I've made tried to solve this jigsaw puzzle ended up hardening the shapes Oh fate falling like a thousand bricks in my way foils my plans of loving you properly destiny, you tender tease Why? Why'd you shatter my bones? Leave me lost, void of control in a shallow grave I made lay my former misguided passions covering shackles on my legs lose lose lose all I ever seem to do when all that I comprehend I try to hang it on a noose inside a room room room filled with opaque absolutes and curried apprehension broken bottles with no excuse Remedy, oh remedy my free will thinker embodied by poisoned truths I dream of only you sweet, sour dues of resurrection have yet to stumble in my life, promising no goodbyes But fate fate fate Led my former love astray It's better this way It's better this way
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Jan 2, 2014
Jan 2, 2014 at 4:43 AM UTC
former love song
Fate, fate, fate well what an awful mess I've made tried to solve this jigsaw puzzle ended up hardening the shapes Oh fate falling like a thousand bricks in my way foils my plans of loving you properly destiny, you tender tease Why? Why'd you shatter my bones? Leave me lost, void of control in a shallow grave I made lay my former misguided passions covering shackles on my legs lose lose lose all I ever seem to do when all that I comprehend I try to hang it on a noose inside a room room room filled with opaque absolutes and curried apprehension broken bottles with no excuse Remedy, oh remedy my free will thinker embodied by poisoned truths I dream of only you sweet, sour dues of resurrection have yet to stumble in my life, promising no goodbyes But fate fate fate Led my former love astray It's better this way It's better this way
a song I just wrote on the living room floor...not sure how I feel about it yet suggestions welcome :) happy new year!
Zphyranthe
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Jan 2, 2014
Jan 2, 2014 at 4:43 AM UTC
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