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Your slim figure & stylish cloths, complement your feminine & **** figure. The white of your big brown eyes, complement your pretty white smile. The fullness of your shiny red lips, complement your long black & silky hair. Your long eye lashes & darkened thinned brows, complement your beautiful skin. Your soft & ***** voice, complements your hypnotic . My heart yearns to save you. I worry for your very life. Your perfectly manicured fingernails, disfigured by the burning, smokey cigarette. The order of  on your cloths & breath distracts from your flowery perfume. Your shortness of breath, accentuates your asthmatic conditions. Your strong & intermittent coughing. worsens by your addictive habit. Your persistent & consistent. Slowly deteriorating your body from within. Why can't you stop? After many visits to the emergency room, Why can't you stop? It doesn't make sense!
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Dec 31, 2013
Dec 31, 2013 at 12:26 AM UTC
It doesn't make sense.
Your slim figure & stylish cloths, complement your feminine & **** figure. The white of your big brown eyes, complement your pretty white smile. The fullness of your shiny red lips, complement your long black & silky hair. Your long eye lashes & darkened thinned brows, complement your beautiful skin. Your soft & ***** voice, complements your hypnotic . My heart yearns to save you. I worry for your very life. Your perfectly manicured fingernails, disfigured by the burning, smokey cigarette. The order of  on your cloths & breath distracts from your flowery perfume. Your shortness of breath, accentuates your asthmatic conditions. Your strong & intermittent coughing. worsens by your addictive habit. Your persistent & consistent. Slowly deteriorating your body from within. Why can't you stop? After many visits to the emergency room, Why can't you stop? It doesn't make sense!
jerry
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M/American
Dec 31, 2013
Dec 31, 2013 at 12:26 AM UTC
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