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I love the rain the way it cleanses purifies the air washing away a great amount of my troubles. Rain has connotations of sadness and gloom I don't understand why. It tries so hard to wash away the worlds troubles sometimes it gets things wrong that's okay. I hate the sun. the way it dirties humidifies the air letting my troubles bake in the atmosphere. Sun has connotations of happiness and glee I don't understand why. It becomes over confident and shines too brightly. It thinks it's always right that's not okay. *
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Dec 30, 2013
Dec 30, 2013 at 9:39 AM UTC
The plucky rain
I love the rain the way it cleanses purifies the air washing away a great amount of my troubles. Rain has connotations of sadness and gloom I don't understand why. It tries so hard to wash away the worlds troubles sometimes it gets things wrong that's okay. I hate the sun. the way it dirties humidifies the air letting my troubles bake in the atmosphere. Sun has connotations of happiness and glee I don't understand why. It becomes over confident and shines too brightly. It thinks it's always right that's not okay. *
listen to pearly-dewdrops' drops //cocteau twins when you read this
louise-smith
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Dec 30, 2013
Dec 30, 2013 at 9:39 AM UTC
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