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I fell in love... with the way you fall asleep. slowly, then all at once. god, I sometimes wish that I saw the pictures that reside underneath your eyelids and the images, that make a map on the inside of your brain. but no, here I am, feet as cold as the heart of a murderer's, listening to coffee steam and the sound of your soft whispers. I fell in love... with the way you fell in love with the sky. the tenderness of the clouds and the fluffiness of the atmosphere, you've always adored the sky; especially after it rained. red-sky, I think you called it. though I've never had the pleasure to witness one (and with you), I hope it looked like you. I hope it looked like your eyes in the evening time. that'd be my redsky. I see redskies. redskies in your eyes, yes, well if that counts. I fell in love... with the way your heart fell into beats. each one sounding like a metronome that stopped to the sound of your voice and had no specific rate. oh, it'd flutter then fall, then rise, and fall again; kind of like how I feel about you. kind of like how I fell for you. kind of how my love is now for you. and I really wished I figured out which part I'm at now, the flutter or the fly part..
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Dec 27, 2013
Dec 27, 2013 at 12:38 PM UTC
I fell in love
I fell in love... with the way you fall asleep. slowly, then all at once. god, I sometimes wish that I saw the pictures that reside underneath your eyelids and the images, that make a map on the inside of your brain. but no, here I am, feet as cold as the heart of a murderer's, listening to coffee steam and the sound of your soft whispers. I fell in love... with the way you fell in love with the sky. the tenderness of the clouds and the fluffiness of the atmosphere, you've always adored the sky; especially after it rained. red-sky, I think you called it. though I've never had the pleasure to witness one (and with you), I hope it looked like you. I hope it looked like your eyes in the evening time. that'd be my redsky. I see redskies. redskies in your eyes, yes, well if that counts. I fell in love... with the way your heart fell into beats. each one sounding like a metronome that stopped to the sound of your voice and had no specific rate. oh, it'd flutter then fall, then rise, and fall again; kind of like how I feel about you. kind of like how I fell for you. kind of how my love is now for you. and I really wished I figured out which part I'm at now, the flutter or the fly part..
my continuation to john green's quote "I fell in love with the way you fall asleep".
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Dec 27, 2013
Dec 27, 2013 at 12:38 PM UTC
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